Friday 25 November 2011

BLOG FEEDBACK, 25 November 2011

Today we have found out that our teacher has left us comments on our blogs with our current grades/target grades. She has also left notes on what could be done better and improved. I would like to look into these comments more, and see what changes can be made. 

My teachers has stated that my spelling needs to be checked, which makes me want to go through my whole blog carefully and check my spelling mistakes, for improvement within my blog.

As I have changed my record label, it still does not fit in with my genre of music as well as the artist. So, once again I am going to change it into a less mainstream record label, for it to fit in with everything.

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